Trust is something fragile
Once you break it
It is hard to get back again
Just like the softest rose petals
That withers and dies
Or the stem of that gentle rose
Once it snaps you can
Never get it back
You sit there and watch it
Then you look at that person
With jaded eyes
Looking at them
With the emptiness you feel inside
Knowing it will never be the same
Wondering if you truly knew
Them at all
I know the rhyme isn't correct, but these are words I wrote to just get out what I feel.
I understand this, although I'm sure the side this is written on is the opposite of mine.
I can relate to this
The rhyme is subtle and not harsh. In fact it's barely noticeable. I really like the way this is written and the emotion that comes through as well as the imagery you used.
I know the feeling...nicely written